This I Believe: The Song

I finally finished the lyrics and guitar part for the song. Hope you all like it. Please give me any feedback!!! This is only the first try so it may not be the best..and don't try to sing it because it has a certain fit with the guitar part so it only really works with it...i think haha. But seriously i need feedback because i really want to make it as best as i possibly can:


There's something wrong with our world today,
I don't know what to do,
Problems rising everywhere,
I don't know what to say.

So much I've learned so recently,
The struggles we all face.
The problems we encounter,
Our minds ripped out of place.

You just keep your
Head high, It'll turn around
No matter when or why just keep your feet on the ground
Be the best you can, with no limits
And don't forget, that you can't stop dreaming,
Just Keep Your
Head high, It'll turn around
No matter when or why just keep your feet on the ground
Be the best you can, with no limits
And don't forget, that you can't stop dreaming

Can't keep livin', the way we are; We gotta
Live strong and embrace our bonds; We gotta
Fight life, with torch and flame
Keep our light bright so we always remain

People may tell you, that you're all wrong
They don't know what's right, you gotta keep strong
From being grey* to procrastination**
It's not up to them, It's your imagination

Just Keep Your
Head high, It'll turn around
No matter when or why just keep your feet on the ground
Be the best you can, with no limits
And don't forget, that you can't stop dreaming,
Just Keep Your
Head high, It'll turn around
No matter when or why just keep your feet on the ground
Be the best you can, with no limits
And don't forget, that you can't stop dreaming

It doesn't matter what they say.
You can make it anyway

They will tell you that you're wrong,
But man you gotta be strong.

Just Keep Your
Head high, It'll turn around
No matter when or why just keep your feet on the ground
Be the best you can, with no limits
And don't forget, that you can't stop dreaming,
Just Keep Your
Head high, It'll turn around
No matter when or why just keep your feet on the ground
Be the best you can, with no limits
And don't forget, that you can't stop dreaming

And at here we take our leave,
Just remember:
This Is What I Believe.

*for Adam and his cold heart :p
**for Fridles and his bad topic :p

Plz feedback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!